Recalibrate on the Fly

Sales began this week—

the car

has been sold globally.

Seems like he would fit in at College of Charleston—Come!

For example,

my face

looks even different,

and better;

mercury extraction methods are expensive

and impractical.

Have died intentionally?—

Comfortably? —with the commission you make!


Waiting for the end as his mind shuts down.


All I did was change the line spacing, punctuation, remove the links to what they were selling, and correct some typos. I think it could be a commentary on how far people go for money and vanity, and how empty all that stuff is in the end. What do you guys think?