This first part of the video works well making the case of disparity in pay. The
Last part its all about Solo and her suspension and her raised voice “17 fing years and its over”. Sorry but what she did at the end took away from the first part. People watching this video first they will remember her reaction to her suspension over the pay disparity.
I do not know who edited this but the video becomes about Solo and her suspension.
Maybe I am wrong in interpreting this. I just know you do not take an important issue then introduce a topic that has nothing to do with the issue and let that topic override the important issue. I am also unsure why Solo is talking about this when the issue is on pay disparity.